Stewart

BEFORE

Here’s an excerpt from Stewart’s old online dating profile:

Friends tell me there are rules in online dating like be funny, pass yourself off as younger and more active, and say that you like to cuddle and hold hands. These rules help a guy get women. So I rewrote my profile a few times but still I can’t pull off all the rules.

AFTER

Stewart’s entire dating profile went on like this. It was a long yet said little about him. I was thrilled when I read the answers to his quiz. Basically, his 5 random facts gave me everything I needed. All I had to do was use my editing skills to make them stand out and use my marketing skills to know where to place them for maximum impact.

I began Stewart’s new online dating profile like this:

I’m a simple man but not ordinary. I’ve survived a tarantula bite. I hiked through the jungles of Costa Rica. I swam through a shipwreck in the Caribbean. Still, I’m happiest playing frisbee with my dog.

I ended his dating profile this way:

My first crush was on a girl who ran after me with a heart-shaped candy that said “kiss me”. I’ve been attracted to strong women ever since. I don’t need you to chase me, but I’d love an email.

The personality quiz revealed Stewart’s unique traits and it also gave me an idea of how down to earth he was. His new online dating profile was short enough to keep someone’s attention yet every single word counted so that the impact was felt from start to finish.

Hopefully these online dating profile samples and tips will help you write a great online dating profile. My best advice, of course, is that you hire me!

NOW IT’S YOUR TURN

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